Highway (After The End)

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First Reformed (dir. Paul Schrader, 2017)

You can’t stretch it any further,
you won’t accept it’s done,
you’re painting on the table now,
the colours begin to run,
and your artistic direction
is harder to defend
in the twilight gallery,
this strange and open End.

This seems so familiar,
but it can’t be the same,
it’s much too light,
it’s much too bright;
a kinder, gentler, game.

You collect every cliché,
and mould every refrain
into a blunt machete
for your overgrown brain.
You haven’t found the narrow road
but you’ve occupied a lane
along the great highway
for the fashionably sane.

Go ‘round the bend,
and reach the end
or just go ‘round again?
The gaudy crown and golden throne
make Him look so vain,
He strikes you down with flaming tongues,
great words you can’t explain.
Will you go ‘round the bend
and reach the end?
Or just go ‘round again?

Beyond the great highway
for the fashionably sane,
beyond the overgrown thicket
of your overgrown brain,
there is a new familiar,
and kinder, gentler game,
there are better things to fight for,
and better things to defend;
this is a new beginning,
a strange and open End.

Inspirations? Bob Dylan, Nick Cave, anxiety, and excitement.


The Weight of Everything

Christ of the Abyss (Key Largo, Florida, USA)

I remember the weight of everything/God’s thumbprint/the contours of deferred divinity/ moving, shaping /burning, breaking, refining/defining/every etching within the edges of the long tunnel/constricting, forcing/each thought through the eye of the shrinking needle/I remember/I remember/the weight of everything/the determined angels/the imps and gremlins/fighting for control of the rusty rudder/rising/writhing its way to the tip of my tongue/I remember/after the rising/writing/the arrival of something else/something other/one-on-one/one-another/I remember the centre/ of God’s thumbprint/ and how it/enveloped/the weight of everything.

Good Things

Untitled (Zdzislaw Beksinski, 1978)

Good things make me nervous.

They feel incomplete; shards of a forgetful colour wheel,

blissful buoys in a monochrome ocean.

I’m content.

I’ve found a comfortable edge.

I hope that change is afraid of heights.

I’m content, and good things make me nervous.

I’m comfortable, and I don’t want to drown.

I’m safe
I’ll stay

on the edge of the water;

I know that the light would weigh me down

Poetry As Failure

Cubist Composition – Portrait of a Seated Person Holding a Letter (Salvador Dali, 1923)

In my more cynical moments, I think of the manifestation of poetry in my writing as a personal failure. It is composed by the creak and collapse of stories more worthy, more complete, and more satisfying. Unable to sustain a prose narrative or script, my words arrange themselves in obstinate patterns, reaching for anachronism and rhyme.
Paragraphs become stanzas, sentences become fragments, and concepts are stretched into haphazard conceits. What is it about this Way, this form, that makes it impossible to escape? What took it from occasion
to compulsion?
A way of writing,
to a way of thinking?

I twist experience
until it cries,
I don’t wait until it heals,
the open wound
to see what it reveals.


I don’t usually  want to write poetry
and, when I do,
it refuses to cooperate,
it’s viscous and brittle.
Form and meter promise comfort and shift on their haunches
I learn their liturgical language,
when I mistake “formal” for “archaic”,
tangle my words into wires,
wrap them ‘round a strangled story,
and call the gasping result

(with a capital “P”)

My poetry makes no sense, and it does not help me. It is a reminder
of my shortcomings, my hang-ups, the stubborn knots in my mind, that send my thoughts the long way ‘round.

My poetry makes no sense, and it does not help me. It’s a reminder
that I’m not a musician,
that people aren’t bound
by the drumbeat of my brain,
and that the chorus is just an echo.

My poetry makes no sense, and it does not help me.
It refuses to be just so,
but I don’t know
what I’d write
(or if I’d write at all)
if I didn’t write damn poetry.
Would I pray?
Would I pray?
I wouldn’t pray at all
if I didn’t write poetry.

It makes no sense,
but it does help me.


This piece deliberately echoes Anne Carson’s poem ‘My Religion’. I also had ‘Pyramid Scheme’ (Hera Lindsay Bird) in the back of my mind as I wrote.







“Translucent Arcs” (photo taken by NASA’s Cassini spacecraft).

It can be hard to get up
to rise through
layers of weightlessness
to listen
for the clinking cogs
to themselves
and for each other
not a brain in a vat
but an echo in a jar
starting softly
It’s time to get up
to move
to rise through
layers of weightlessness
to remix
that clinking-cog chorus
invite them
force them
invite them
to face the audience
face the music
listen to the spheres
those spiraling songs
from beyond the jar
the exhausted eternities
the lovingly butchered notes
an ode
to attempted symmetry.


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Winter Light (dir. Ingmar Bergman, 1963).

By lamenting Your absence, we discern Your outline.
We mimic Your heartbeat with our clenched fists.

Our words break like waves
on the Rock of Your reality,
our thoughts, like foam, dissipate
on the edge of your Being
and we stand,
we stand,
on sinking sand.

Abba, Father, we don’t understand.

Your Words are the waves that shape our reality,
Your mind a furnace
that refines our being,
and we stand,
we stand,
on your outstretched hand;
You see,
You know,
You understand.


My Favourite Films of 2018

All the of films on this list were made available in NZ (by theatrical release, VOD/streaming, or festivals) during the year 2018. Although I have managed to pick 10 favourites, ranking them was a bridge too far.


The Shape of Water (dir. Guillermo del Toro, starring Sally Hawkins and Doug Jones).

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I honestly think that Guillermo del Toro is, in many ways, CS Lewis’ modern-day successor.  He has a deep, intuitive grasp of fairy tales and their primal pull on the mind of an audience. The Shape of Water may be ‘adult’ (content-wise), but it never falls prey to cheap cynicism and lazy ‘irony’. Instead, the film is a wonderful tale of monsters and outsiders, pulling apart the reactionary attitudes that plague mankind with childlike (not childish) innocence and wonder. Additionally, Sally Hawkins’ performance as the mute Eliza is one of the best onscreen portrayals of a disabled person that I’ve seen in recent years.

Phantom Thread (dir. Paul Thomas Anderson, starring Daniel Day-Lewis and Vicky Krieps).

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Like the other pieces in PTA’s filmography, Phantom Thread is difficult to pin down.  To me, the film occupies a strange no-man’s-land between period drama, psychological thriller, and ghost story.  Daniel Day-Lewis and Vicky Krieps are both superb, dancing with (and around) each other in circles of jealousy and twisted co-dependency. An ethereal film, Phantom Thread is hard to grasp, but impossible to forget. It also has the distinction of being accompanied by my favourite original score of the year (courtesy of Jonny Greenwood).

STRAY (dir. Dustin Feneley. Starring Kieran Charnock and Arta Dobroshi).

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Having watched this film in cinemas twice, I think I can safely say that STRAY is one of my favourite Kiwi films.  STRAY tells an eerie story about two outsiders finding each other in Central Otago. Like Phantom Thread, the film is driven by fraught undercurrents of emotion and rewards repeated viewing. I’d be doing you a disservice if I tried to describe it further. Seek it out.

 Sweet Country (dir. Warwick Thornton. Starring Hamilton Morris, Sam Neill, and Bryan Brown).

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An Australian Western, Sweet Country tells the story of an Aboriginal man (Hamilton Morris) who goes on the run after killing a white man in self-defence. He is pursued by a hard-edged lawman and a compassionate pacifist (played by Bryan Brown and Sam Neill, respectively), and the chase becomes an unsparing exploration of racism and justice. One of the (many) technical highlights of the film is its editing, which portrays the forces of memory and confabulation in a very striking way.

The Death of Stalin (dir. Armando Iannucci. Starring Steve Buscemi, Michael Palin, Jeffery Tambor, Olga Kurylenko, Andrea Riseborough…)

Mike Pompeo, Donald Trump Jr., Ivanka Trump, John McCain, and General John Kelly ... or rather, their 1953 Russian variants.

It’s hard to believe that Armando Iannucci, creator of the tv series The Thick of It and Veep (among many others), had not turned his hand to directing before now. His first feature is a strange beast. Iannucci and his ensemble render the chaos that erupted after Stalin’s death as a high-stakes comedy of manners. This may seem like a tall order (and it did attract some outrage), but Iannucci and co.’s target is never in doubt. Horror and human frailty permeate every scene and reveal the absurdity that undergirds any totalitarian project.

First Reformed (dir. Paul Schrader. Starring Ethan Hawke and Amanda Seyfried).

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Paul Schrader, the renegade theologian of American cinema, gives Ethan Hawke a truly amazing role in First Reformed. Reverend Ernst Toller (Hawke), is a severely depressed man struggling to keep his church (and faith) afloat. He befriends a young couple of radical environmentalists (played Amanda Seyfried and Philip Ettinger), who force him to ask, “Can God forgive us for what we’ve done to His creation?” First Reformed both recalls and modernises the work of Carl Theodore Dryer and Robert Bresson (by way of Schrader’s own Taxi Driver), and the result is an extremely compelling film.

Annihilation (dir. Alex Garland. Starring Natalie Portman).

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Of all the films on this list, Annihilation is the one that I have thought about the most. Alex Garland has made a film that is so uncanny, its aliens so…other, that it has taken up permanent residence in my imagination. The film follows a group of scientists who are tasked with investigating “The Shimmer”. This anomalous, expanding entity doesn’t just mutate the anything it comes in contact with, it appears to recreate things on a fundamental level. This film doesn’t just ask what it means to be human, it questions whether the idea of humanity has any meaning on any level. Unnerving, thought-provoking, and just a little bit terrifying.

 Private Life (dir. Tamara Jenkins. Starring Kathryn Hayn and Paul Giamatti).

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A gem hidden among Netflix’s annual deluge of original content, Private Life follows a middle-aged couple as they navigate the minefields of adoption, surrogacy, and IVF. Fittingly, this film made me feel like a voyeur: the dialogue is well-written (but never unnatural), the awkwardness is excruciating (but never farcical), and the relationships feel authentic and lived-in. I’m very glad that the Almighty Netflix Algorithm (peace be upon it, may it live forever…) deemed it worthy of my attention, and it’s worthy of yours.

Anna and The Apocalypse (dir. John McPhail. Starring Ella Hunt and Malcolm Cumming).

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Any film that comes with the label “zombie Christmas musical” has a lot to live up too, and this film delivers in spades.  By balancing humour, horror, and catchy songs (with a few old-fashioned jump-scares), Anna and The Apocalypse became the most enjoyable time I had at the movies this year. If you thought that La La Land would’ve been improved by an undead horde (or two), then this is the film for you.

Sorry to Bother You (dir. Boots Riley. Starring Lakeith Stanfield and Tessa Thompson). 

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It’s so, so exciting when weird movies get a lot of mainstream attention, especially ones as confidently bizarre as Sorry to Bother You. Boots Riley (another first-time director) crafts a hyper-stylized, heightened tale of late capitalism and corporate control that utilizes a mishmash of genre conventions and aesthetics. On top of juggling many different stylistic influences and tones, Riley manages to pull off on of the most effective (and memorable) left-turns I’ve seen in a recent film. I hope that he has more movies in him.


Some of the other films I enjoyed in 2018:

  • BlackkKlansman (dir. Spike Lee. Starring John David Washington and Adam Driver).
  • Lady Bird (dir. Greta Gerwig. Starring Saoirse Ronan).
  • Black Panther (dir. Ryan Coogler. Starring Chadwick Boseman and Michael B. Jordan).
  • Isle of Dogs (dir. Wes Anderson. Starring Bryan Cranston, Edward Norton, Jeff Goldblum…)
  • First Man (dir. Damien Chazelle. Starring Ryan Gosling and Claire Foy).
  • I, Tonya (dir. Craig Gillespie. Starring Margot Robbie, Allison Janney, and Sebastien Stan).
  • Bumblebee (dir. Travis Knight. Starring Hailee Steinfeld and Jorge Lendeborg Jr).
  • A Wrinkle in Time (dir. Ava DuVernay. Starring Storm Reid, Levi Miller, and Deric McCabe).